Nuclear crisisThree atomic power plants should stay open for another 10 years due to the crisis.
Over the last few years there has been a lot of research in renewable energy, but now these research plans are wiped away because they cost to much money. By extension, the Belgian government doesn’t find enough alternatives to be able to close the three plants that were supposed to close in 2015. This new plan doesn’t come without risks because the plants are off age and experts don’t know what the consequences will be.
Jonas Van Seymortier
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1 opmerking:
S2: research on
S2: too much money
S3: repetition of close in one and the same sentence: rewrite to make it shorter and snappier.
S4: are of age
Good flow and single focus, but too many accuracy errors at this level.
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