dinsdag 6 oktober 2009

Hustle and bustle at World Bank


The World Bank is reaching its financial limits as it is squaring up to the financial crises. In order to restore the deep cracks in the economy of the needing countries, the call for capital increases sharply. Therefore a higher contribution from the countries is needed. At the beginning of 2010 there has to be a proposal finished with details to obtain the extra amount of capital.
Sofie Van Dun

1 opmerking:

EcoEnglish zei

Good single focus and flow. Mind some language issues:

S1: crisis
S2: needy / countries in need
S3: therefore is correctly used but a bit overformal / that's why, consequently
S4: At the start of 2010, a proposal has to be finished detailing how to obtain...