Due to the worldwide financial crisis, economies
are threatened by a lack of credit.
This holds back economies from making investments
and their main fear is global recession.
Therefore central banks are taking serious measures
and all lowered their interest-rate.
Nevertheless the IMF expects the global economic growth
will fall to 3% in 2009 and predicts a global recession.
Delphine Pattyn
http://www.economist.com/finance/displaystory.cfm?story_id=12381879
1 opmerking:
OK, although the story is relatively unspectacular
Perhaps too many linking words in sentence-initial position: this makes the text feel like an argument...
Details:
This holds THEM back from ...
HAVE lowered
no hyphen with 'interest rate'
comma needed after 'Nevertheless'
no definite article with 'growth'
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